Well I think that I will do both Angel and brittany's post as one separate post.
first off the one thing is to is to post my other pictures so here they are.
Ok, so for the first one, "The mind is never blank." I completely agree with the concept, but I'm not entirely sure I like what you did with it. I like the silver type on a black background, especially with the white outline. It really stands out. I'm not quite sure what to think about the continuous repetition of the word "blank" throughout the background, but I suppose it does support the quote...I guess my main problem with it would be that the first thing that catches your eye (or at least the first thing that catches mine) in not the quote, but the large type of the word "blank" near the center of the page. Then again that may be part of the charm of the quote, it depends on your opinion.
blank: i would've liked to see a little more color. and if the words had a little more shape, it would make the poster more appealing. You should make the part where you want the emphasis to be really "pop".
Resistance: the part where it says" Resistance is futile", make sure it's all the same color, and that it fits on the same line as that phrase. The spelling in "Your still one of us" is wrong. So I would change that to "You're still one of us." or "You are still one of us." And then the colors don't really blend together for me. Nothing really goes "BANG" except the people. or me, I wouldn't put the people, because it distracts to what you want to focus on. Try something a little more subtle.
Terry Baker: the textured look is cool. the background is a little too busy for me... and i would suggest having the text a brighter color. My eyes are drawn to the background, and not to the text.
Now for the second one: "Resistance is futile, Your still one of us." Where to start? Well, I like the thought, but are you absolutely certain you didn't mean, "Resistance is futile, you're still one of us."? Also I think that it would have been better if you had just put "resistance" in the other color and if you had either capitalized everything, the first letter of every word or just left the "y" in "your" lower case. In addition to those things I think it would also have improved your quote's overall effect by putting more emphasis on the word, "still"
Ok, finally, on the last one, "A program..." I think that the background is a little busy. I think that it would have been much better if the quote itself had not been like semi-transpirant or maybe it was behind all the binary code, I would have liked it much better (or at least I think I would) if that had not been the case. I did like the fact that the background was code like that though.
"The Mind is never blank" -'blank' being large in the center is very emphasizing; I would recommend moving the actual quote to maybe above or around the word 'blank' and allowing 'blank' to be a part of the quote. it's a little confusing otherwise.
"resistance is futile" -loved the animation to go along with the quote. Fit the mood perfectly. -Would recommend: making "resistance is futile" all fit on one line, resizing "you're still one of us" smaller and checking grammar/spelling/capitalization.
"a program is" -the background was nice, tech-y, like the quote. -Would suggest to move the word "complete" to a separate line and not have it hyphenated. Slightly hard to read.
1st: Good slant and i like the first font. I would change the angle of the sentence so it correlates with Blank.
2nd: I like the background and the sky along with the figures. Then again i think it focuses to much on the figures and not enough on the text itself. I would change the top line font color to something darker so it doesn't blend in with the sky.
3rd": Good quote and i like the angle everything is at. I would change the font to something darker so it doesn't blend with the backround
i like the first one because of the lighting differences. it got the point across very well. the second one was good because i thought the drawings were a cute touch the last one was a good quote, but next time try to make more contrast between the words and background to make it pop more
I really like what you did with the first one. I like the way the word blank repeats on the background and how the big blank stands out and looks really nice. The second one is interesting the characters make it say something and the clouds and stuff are awesome. The thrd one is a little to much like the first one for my liking but i like the green color and the slanted type.
On the first poster, I like how you used the word "blank" all through the background, but I was a little confused by the big blank in the center, I thought it was a part of the quote, so I'd say you might want to make it a little more opaque or something, so it doesn't stand out quite so much. Second poster: I like how you made the "Resistance is" part shaded, so it's darker at the bottom, but I would say to change "futile" to be shaded like it because it makes the quote make a little more sense. And finally the third poster, I liked that the background and the text go together with their colors, but that also makes them a little hard to read; I also like that the words are slanted so they line up with your background. So the only thing I'd say to change about this one is maybe the font color so it's easier to read.
i think you did a very good job on the first one with the backround and the words really show the quote! and ive never seen south park so i didnt really get the second one but you can see the words well and for the last one you can really see the words i had a hard time reading it so maybe you could find a way to either change the coloring or change the back round
1st poster: good idea, but i don't think that i like the repeat of the word 'blank'. maybe if it was under the actual quote, but it makes it seem like the word 'blank' is the main part of the poster, when the real point of the poster was supposed to be the actual quote. 2nd poster: this poster definitely was NOT my favorite. the word 'resistance' blends in with the background so that you can't see it. i also don't really like the little people you put on there. maybe instead you could have done silhouettes of people or something, but i just think that the cartoon-ish people look funny. 3rd poster: this third poster is really hard to read. i also think that its too dark. brighter colors!!
2. spelling words correctly is important. well, 'your' was spelled correctly but was in the wrong context. it's supposed to be 'you're'. " Resistance is..." blended in too much. the sky was too dark compared to the grass and the people. other than that it was fine!
Ok, so for the first one,
ReplyDelete"The mind is never blank."
I completely agree with the concept, but I'm not entirely sure I like what you did with it. I like the silver type on a black background, especially with the white outline. It really stands out. I'm not quite sure what to think about the continuous repetition of the word "blank" throughout the background, but I suppose it does support the quote...I guess my main problem with it would be that the first thing that catches your eye (or at least the first thing that catches mine) in not the quote, but the large type of the word "blank" near the center of the page. Then again that may be part of the charm of the quote, it depends on your opinion.
blank: i would've liked to see a little more color. and if the words had a little more shape, it would make the poster more appealing. You should make the part where you want the emphasis to be really "pop".
ReplyDeleteResistance: the part where it says" Resistance is futile", make sure it's all the same color, and that it fits on the same line as that phrase. The spelling in "Your still one of us" is wrong. So I would change that to "You're still one of us." or "You are still one of us." And then the colors don't really blend together for me. Nothing really goes "BANG" except the people. or me, I wouldn't put the people, because it distracts to what you want to focus on. Try something a little more subtle.
Terry Baker: the textured look is cool. the background is a little too busy for me... and i would suggest having the text a brighter color. My eyes are drawn to the background, and not to the text.
Now for the second one: "Resistance is futile, Your still one of us."
ReplyDeleteWhere to start? Well, I like the thought, but are you absolutely certain you didn't mean, "Resistance is futile, you're still one of us."? Also I think that it would have been better if you had just put "resistance" in the other color and if you had either capitalized everything, the first letter of every word or just left the "y" in "your" lower case. In addition to those things I think it would also have improved your quote's overall effect by putting more emphasis on the word, "still"
Ok, finally, on the last one, "A program..." I think that the background is a little busy. I think that it would have been much better if the quote itself had not been like semi-transpirant or maybe it was behind all the binary code, I would have liked it much better (or at least I think I would) if that had not been the case. I did like the fact that the background was code like that though.
ReplyDelete"The Mind is never blank"
ReplyDelete-'blank' being large in the center is very emphasizing; I would recommend moving the actual quote to maybe above or around the word 'blank' and allowing 'blank' to be a part of the quote. it's a little confusing otherwise.
"resistance is futile"
-loved the animation to go along with the quote. Fit the mood perfectly.
-Would recommend: making "resistance is futile" all fit on one line, resizing "you're still one of us" smaller and checking grammar/spelling/capitalization.
"a program is"
-the background was nice, tech-y, like the quote.
-Would suggest to move the word "complete" to a separate line and not have it hyphenated. Slightly hard to read.
Also, on the "blank", the lighting and shading was very well put out.
ReplyDelete1st: Good slant and i like the first font. I would change the angle of the sentence so it correlates with Blank.
ReplyDelete2nd: I like the background and the sky along with the figures. Then again i think it focuses to much on the figures and not enough on the text itself. I would change the top line font color to something darker so it doesn't blend in with the sky.
3rd": Good quote and i like the angle everything is at. I would change the font to something darker so it doesn't blend with the backround
i like the first one because of the lighting differences. it got the point across very well.
ReplyDeletethe second one was good because i thought the drawings were a cute touch
the last one was a good quote, but next time try to make more contrast between the words and background to make it pop more
i like the first one and the last one because blank kind of looks like m name. the last on is cool because how all the word lit together.
ReplyDeleteI really like what you did with the first one. I like the way the word blank repeats on the background and how the big blank stands out and looks really nice. The second one is interesting the characters make it say something and the clouds and stuff are awesome.
ReplyDeleteThe thrd one is a little to much like the first one for my liking but i like the green color and the slanted type.
On the first poster, I like how you used the word "blank" all through the background, but I was a little confused by the big blank in the center, I thought it was a part of the quote, so I'd say you might want to make it a little more opaque or something, so it doesn't stand out quite so much.
ReplyDeleteSecond poster: I like how you made the "Resistance is" part shaded, so it's darker at the bottom, but I would say to change "futile" to be shaded like it because it makes the quote make a little more sense.
And finally the third poster, I liked that the background and the text go together with their colors, but that also makes them a little hard to read; I also like that the words are slanted so they line up with your background. So the only thing I'd say to change about this one is maybe the font color so it's easier to read.
i think you did a very good job on the first one with the backround and the words really show the quote! and ive never seen south park so i didnt really get the second one but you can see the words well and for the last one you can really see the words i had a hard time reading it so maybe you could find a way to either change the coloring or change the back round
ReplyDelete1st poster:
ReplyDeletegood idea, but i don't think that i like the repeat of the word 'blank'. maybe if it was under the actual quote, but it makes it seem like the word 'blank' is the main part of the poster, when the real point of the poster was supposed to be the actual quote.
2nd poster:
this poster definitely was NOT my favorite. the word 'resistance' blends in with the background so that you can't see it. i also don't really like the little people you put on there. maybe instead you could have done silhouettes of people or something, but i just think that the cartoon-ish people look funny.
3rd poster:
this third poster is really hard to read. i also think that its too dark. brighter colors!!
1. very dramatic.
ReplyDelete2. spelling words correctly is important. well, 'your' was spelled correctly but was in the wrong context. it's supposed to be 'you're'. " Resistance is..." blended in too much. the sky was too dark compared to the grass and the people. other than that it was fine!
3.blended in too easily.